Something I just made. And yes, I'm aware I spelled Sparrow wrong, sue me.

Uff.. amazing work (:

Gangstar15 wrote:Uff.. amazing work (:

Thanks!

Amazing. I didn't find anything to pick on

I like it, but there are a few things I need to be picky about. The render is pretty much in the middle of the sig which is a huge no-no, your text sticks out like a sore thumb, and I don't think he blends in too well with the background. All in all, it doesn't look like there's a lot of work done to this sig. :/

It is pretty rad just like ronin said make it off center. Two-thirds rule.

Ronin wrote:I like it, but there are a few things I need to be picky about. The render is pretty much in the middle of the sig which is a huge no-no, your text sticks out like a sore thumb, and I don't think he blends in too well with the background. All in all, it doesn't look like there's a lot of work done to this sig. :/

Why is the render in teh middle a huge no-no? Looks fine to me.

Have to agree with you on the text, didn't put any effort into it at all.

Compared to the original stock, I think I did a lot of work.

virtuosity wrote:It is pretty rad just like ronin said make it off center. Two-thirds rule.

Why make it off center? The position he's standing in just doesn't allow it.

What I do when I don't know what to do with text, is, I create a clipping mask of the text and then usually add a glow, so it blends in as well as sticks out.

It's like the first rule of graphic design not to place a render in the middle of a sig, btw. lol

Ronin wrote:What I do when I don't know what to do with text, is, I create a clipping mask of the text and then usually add a glow, so it blends in as well as sticks out.

It's like the first rule of graphic design not to place a render in the middle of a sig, btw. lol

Must have missed that rule in my years of experience in design.

Must not be important considering your current sig. disobeys this "rule."

Lol, I put him towards the left-ish area.

Just to the human eye center looks to blah. When you put it off center it gives it a little more action and pleases the eye better.

http://abduzeedo.com/superb-rule-thirds-photography
Here are some good examples.

virtuosity wrote:Just to the human eye center looks to blah. When you put it off center it gives it a little more action and pleases the eye better.

http://abduzeedo.com/superb-rule-thirds-photography
Here are some good examples.

Perty pictures...

Seriously though, it doesn't change the appeal of the signature in any way because he's in the center.

Well try moving him over a little bit then post it